Monday, May 13, 2013

Additional note about river tooth essays, posted as announcement and in Lesson 3 Notes from Instructor

Dear Class,
A very wise student pointed out today that the "river tooth" essays we read this week are all pretty intense and traumatic. Please don't think that your river tooth essay ought to be traumatic.
 
The river tooth directions state, "Often 'river tooth' experiences are memories of scenes or short events with high emotional content. Your job is to write about your own 'river tooth' experience by simply describing the memory of a past life event. Convey the emotional impact it had on you. You do not need to reflect on the meaning of the event (you’ll do that for your personal essay). You are just capturing the imagery and emotional impact of the experience through detail and narration (story telling)."
 
As you write your essay, remember that you will have to share your essay with your peers at the Thursday Gathering, and with me. The wise student mentioned above writes that some students "may divulge ordeals that only bishops or trained therapists should hear. The first reading, about lust and trauma, plants in the mind images that could invite students to share abuse or other topics that are not appropriate to share in casual class settings."
 
So be prayerful as you decide what to write. You can write about something that had an emotional impact--and the emotional impact can be positive!
 
I know I've bombarded you with marathon stories, but describing how I felt at the finish line of my marathon would be an absolute pleasure. Look at me: I'm not doing anything for anyone--I am pure happy. Describing that moment in detail would meet the river tooth requirements, and it would be fun to write. If you are concerned about the content of your essay, will you please email me? I want this to be a good experience for all of us.
Love,
Sister Bowen

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